Goal: Personal Voice.
Hook Writing
BANG!!! Went the door as I raced inside to get mum’s ipad. The next minute I heard constent yelling, . I ran outside thinking what could have been so major. And then at that moment forward I thought I was never going to see them again.
I had saw that the bunnies cage had rolled over into the garden ditch, By the wildest wind in the west. I thought oh god what happens if I never see Rascal again. I won't have a bunny anymore. I was so upset I started screaming and crying.
I found Rascal under the hedge round the back. I had to hurt him. I thought I would have lost him but no. Now onto the next bunny, Twitch. I saw Twitch he was running towards the garden. I quickly handed Jack Rascal. Jack had said to me " calm down they are just bunnies"
I countiuned his sentence by saying " bunnies I will probably never see again"
I saw him Twitch the one thats the cheekiest. He was right by the garden, I had to be really quite otherwise he would know that I am there. I dived to catch him, he was so hesitant to get away but I didn't let him.
I tryed to yell out to Cooper to come outside to help me but he just sat inside watching T.V. I told Jack to switch with me and give Cooper, Twitch and tell him what happened. Jack followed me inside to Cooper. Mum said to play with them until she gets their cage all fixed up.
We played with the bunnies for half an hour and then put them away.
I hope they want get out again.
Thanks for reading my story.
Emily
