My Superhero poem's

 Wonder Women

Wonder women, Wonder women saves the day and she also likes to play with children all day, Wonder women, Wonderwoman likes to play but not when the classroom is messy all day.

           Always remember to clean up after yourselves

Supergirl

Supergirl,Supergirl likes to fly but not when her town has rubbish all around, Supergirl, Supergirl doesn't really like

When her bike turned into a trike.

Pick up rubbish even if it isn't yours.

Don’t litter anywhere.

Please remeber these messages and do the right thing.

How to write a quality comment on a blog

How to use images properly.

MY .......... ESCAPED

Goal: Personal Voice.
Hook Writing

BANG!!! Went the door as I raced inside to get mum’s ipad. The next minute I heard constent yelling, . I ran outside thinking what could have been so major. And then at that moment forward I thought I was never going to see them again.

I had saw that the bunnies cage had rolled over into the garden ditch, By the wildest wind in the west. I thought oh god what happens if I never see Rascal again. I won't have a bunny anymore. I was so upset I started screaming and crying.

I found Rascal under the hedge round the back. I had to hurt him. I thought I would have lost him but no. Now onto the next bunny, Twitch. I saw Twitch he was running towards the garden. I quickly handed Jack Rascal. Jack had said to me " calm down they are just bunnies"


I countiuned his sentence by saying " bunnies I will probably never see again"
I saw him Twitch the one thats the cheekiest. He was right by the garden, I had to be really quite otherwise he would know that I am there. I dived to catch him, he was so hesitant to get away but I didn't let him.

I tryed to yell out to Cooper to come outside to help me but he just sat inside watching T.V. I told Jack to switch with me and give Cooper, Twitch and tell him what happened. Jack followed me inside to Cooper. Mum said to play with them until she gets their cage all fixed up.


We played with the bunnies for half an hour and then put them away.
I hope they want get out again.

Thanks for reading my story.
Emily

my feelings before camp.

My writing goal is: Describe my writing better and Personal Voice. 

Frightened

I am frightened of the big slimy eels that are in the lake where we go Kayaking. I don’t want to get bitten by an eel. I am also frightened of the big spiders in our cabins. I really don’t want them to crawl on my face at night. I also really don’t want to roll out of bed onto the ground or on Georgia. I don’t want the possums to scratch on my cabin window to wake me up at night. The last thing that I am scared of is mosquitoes biting me, so I get big itchy bites.

Excited

I am excited about camp because I will get to try kayaking for the second time in my whole entire life, and I get to be in a cabin with my BFF’s and they are Georgia.M and Violet. We are in the Bellbird cabin. I am also excited about sleeping in a bunk bed because I always sleep in a single bed.I am also Excited about camp because my mum's coming with me to sort out the food. I can’t wait to go to camp.

Nervous

I am Nervous because I might get carsick along the way or I might sleepwalk at night. I just don’t want to do any of those things at camp and I also don’t want to roll out of bed at night.